Just a quick point, you might want to take out the footer with your real name for anonymity reasons. And my own personal tip, don't use "super" in a research paper. I dont really know what the instructions were for this research paper, but if it's about what could help people with stuttering and he doesn't want to accept social solutions, I would say that learning to accept your stutter vs trying to hide it is a change i've found helped a lot of people.