For the cringey part see my response to RK917, it's simply my sense of humor, I'm completely aware of the cringiness and like to exaggerate it for comedic effect. As for the other parts, then the pick up line part simply isn't for you but you can definitely make it into an asking out line if you're creative enough. Comedy is golden, I really wanted to focus on the picking up chicks side of things in this because I notice that more guys than girls have stutters, more guys are straight than gay and most guys with stutters have even worse stutters and get really anxious about talking to girls. I focus on the pick up lines and asking out because it's a common thing people with stutters struggle with from what I've seen and personally experienced earlier in life. As for paragraphs, I'm on mobile so I wrote it the same way I text, nothing I can really say about that. Turning texts into separate paragraphs feels weird so making posts with paragraphs on mobile feels just as weird to me.