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I think you have to think about why it's relevant to write about your stutter at all. (I'm not being dismissive, I actually mean WHY). You need to tie it into the larger story of who you are and/or what you want to do. Btw, at this point, what you want to do is not necessarily a specific job but more of a broad direction that you want to go into. I think the story of Alan Rabinowitz best illustrates this point, although your story might be a bit more complex. He grew up with a severe stutter and didn't have any friends. But when he went home he would talk to all of his pets. He realized that he could talk to animals without stuttering (they wouldn't talk back obviously). He decided that when he got voice, he would be there voice. And he became a very influential conservation biologist. Personally, my stutter is a big part of why I decided to go into medicine. I'm not going to go into my entire narrative here, but everyone's story is different. And the challenge that stuttering poses to us affects us depending on our lives and our context.