I honestly agree with the "English pls" guy in the comments. To be fair I'm not a native English speaker, but I do consider myself to be more than fluent. I feel like there has to be a way to summarize this research paper in a language that is easier to understand. There is not a single sentence in your post that doesn't include one or more scientific words, that most people won't be familiar with. I love the effort and I'll try to read it again tomorrow (it's very late where I'm at), but I think that if you want more people to engage with your post, you have to be able to explain these things in a simpler way. It reminds me of (possibly fake) Einstein quote: "If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough."